• I’m writing this off the top of my head, this is a rough first draft based on memory of my notes from twenty years ago.  I’ve misplaced the notes so I’m having to recreate this on-the-fly.  There will by typos, a few mistakes and more.
• “Anna” in the first two pages, is pure coincidence that I plucked that name out and may not have anything to do with the “Anna” from the very first Predator movie, or does it..?
• This is not a typical Predator/Alien story.  I’m trying to add more intelligence, spin the story around non-Hollywood muscle-brained approaches and hint as much deeper maturity in much of the background and action.  This has brains, and not all splattered across the jungle floor, well mostly.
• I’m tired of idiot scripts in the Predator/Alien series, let’s do better.
• Added one costume illustration: JungleSprinter
• Added additional illustration of Predator beside Downloads…
• I’ve identified a number of commercial spin-off opportunities from elements in this project which could offset film production risk and enhance world-wide popular participation.  Including video games, game arenas, hunting arenas/courses, clothes, weapons.  I assert and reserve all IP design, patent and copy and other applicable rights for these elements.
• I wonder if this could be extended and developed into a TV series, if we could get Game of Thrones scale budgets?
• I hope this can be more accurate for real-world military conduct, following all the year’s we’ve seen special forces in combat after 9/11.  We need a greater realism if this is to be a greater story.  I can’t promise this will be militarily accurate in every detail at this draft stage but that can be fixed in later drafts with a good ex-forces consultant.
• First in a new series – The Predator War?
• Commercial financial risk can be reduced once I’ve completed principal fund-raising for another key project.  After this I should have credit lines to fund the entire project series.

13/July/2014 – At p29.  Will take a week or two off to contemplate the jungle combat scenes – these are going to be interesting, to choreograph several combats and many characters – and design a Duk to raise funds for future productions.

14/August/2014 – Managed to complete the Duk in time but been set back on the Predator work.  Will get back to it as soon as possible… 

21/November/2014 – I have taken time out review the current set and correct a few typos and rewrite a few lines.  All the above pages have new been replaced with new sets, so if you downloaded them previously you might want to get the new set from pages 1 to 32.
Thought you might like the additional illustration (left) to tease you!

31/December/2014 – Managed to make time for a few more pages – 33 onwards.

1/January/2015 NOTE:  I noticed the font and page layout was wrong, looks like the fount had dropped off my system during the last major edit, so all pages 1-31 have been reformatted back to the correct font.  If you have already downloaded those early pages it is best to do it again so you are in-line with the rest of the script when it comes.

13/March/2015 – Now made a new push to complete another batch of pages.

5/July/2015 – Cleared the next nine pages (48-56).  I may now have resolved the key final confrontation scene that’s been holding me back for months.  That will come next.

13/July/2015 – Completed, first rough draft. Hope you like it.  Plus a few footnotes about the project for your entertainment.

14/Sept/2018 – Compiled the whole script as one download, with small tweaks to the first page to sharpen it a little.  You can download this or refer to the original “Chapters” as they were originally produced and published below.